Problems and praise for popular new song

One of the new songs published in the new selections, "I Will Walk with Jesus," is a beautiful tune with a beautiful meaning and message that the kids love to sing. And there are some very clever, well-written moments throughout. Yet, there are some moments that could have been crafted a little more cleanly. This presents a perfect opportunity. Not to slander the writer of this fine song. Not at all. That is not my intention in the slightest. I wish to praise them for their excellent work....